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oh my...

gives me the chillllss~ I like this, i like this a lot. I think the lead melody could have a little bit more something to them, but i'm not sure what. Maybe a little more twang. A bit more spice. Love the fluctuation waves you give to them, helps with the feel a LOT. I really can feel this song move me. Definitely deserving of the title.

I dunno man. Varied on the spectrum overall, love the bass and the drive, not feelin it on the lead. Unfortunately i'm not fully experienced in dubstep and thus couldn't really give you great tips on improving the leads. So just gotta say, awesome work. keep it up!

superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks,i dont have a midi keyboard so its sorta hard to do leads and such,thanks for the review though!

Holy SHIT!

WOW. I can just say, 25 seconds into the song, I'm already blown away. I expect solely a classical song. I was pretty "okay, this should be good." Then the drums come in and i'm sitting here like "WHOAAAAA ORGASM?!"

I love how the triangles come in right before the beat kicks up epically, and everything just picks up all at once. It's almost overwhelming, but 80% in a good way. And the breakdown around 1:21? So superb. Once that goes by, the outro leaves such a strong impression on the listener. HOWEVER.

The fade-out. I do believe that completely ruins the original impression left prior to that section. I think it's innovative, but my personal opinion would be that if you ever change this up, make the outro memorable and huge. You build up such an AMAZING song at the beginning and throughout, and then you get this anticlimactic "huh? it just fades?" at the end. So I'm really really pleased with this song, I think you and Supersteph(?) did a great job of this collab (assuming it's a collab), but the end should give closure to the song, not leave it open ended. At least, that's the way I see it. It's kind of a hit or miss with that whole thing; a lot of people might actually think that's a great ending. It felt rather abrupt in my opinion, is all.

Overall i was indecisive as to whether or not to give you a 7 or an 8. I would've given you a 9 or a 10, but the ending was really disappointing honestly.

I ended up with a 7. Great work overall, outro significantly disappointing.

GronmonSE responds:

Oh hey, you came out of nowhere lol.

Yeah, lots of people have disliked the simple ending. I could have expanded on it but I don't know what happened, it's like my brain shuts down. Didn't think so many people would be bothered by it though.

Thanks for the great review and for checking out my song :) I think "New Life v2" might interest you if you liked this. No pressure though!

You owe me a new pair of headphones...

My ears literally just orgasmed all over them.

hopeku responds:

buahaha i'd rather buy a box of kleenex

oooh la la~!

Definitely fit the robot day theme. I can imagine a bunch of robots gettin down on the dance floor with this, hah. Awesome work

Japillow responds:

Thanks for the review!

Cool, but...

What's with the volume fluctuating? Is it supposed to do that? If it is, I'd change that, it makes it sound a little funky... But otherwise, extremely impressive. Good job.

Dreamcastle responds:

That's the manifestation of my inexperience with using compressing and limiters. This song gave me so much hell when it came to mixing. I might fix it when I'm a bit more knowledgeable.

Killer!

I think the drums could have been done a little better though. In fact, my personal opinion is to take the drums out entirely, and give the trumpet-sounding instrument at around 1:02-1:16 a bit more echo or something to them so they don't sound so 8-bit-ish.

The Piano could also go with some soft echo to give it a bit more feeling.

Otherwise, i REALLY like this, and not just cuz i love the original version XD Good work!

knuxrouge responds:

I'm pretty bad with drums, but thanks though.

Meh.

You DID say this was a demo, which i'm thankful for, cuz if you hadn't specified that i woulda been a little... scared. As stated before, this DOES have potential... The vocals are a bit weird with the flanger-sounding FX and the guitar drowns out the vocals. otherwise i say that you could go REALLY far with this song.

SwampWater responds:

Thanks for the insight, I appreciate it and I'm working really hard and investing a good bit of money into polishing this song and making it sound a million miles better!

Reminds me of something from Square Enix...

I Like the soft fantasy-like feel. Seems like the main menu theme of something by Square Enix. And i LOVE Square's soundtracks. Bravo, bravo. I wanna hear more stuff like this one :D

broove responds:

Thanks man. I'm glad you liked it ;)

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